推薦是留學重要文件,寫作的好處與入學直接相關。那么,我們來看看如何寫申請日本碩士學位的推薦信?
我們先來看看寫作的基本內容。
1. 推薦人與申請人之間的關系;
推薦人與申請人的關系一般如下:
1)師生關系(導師和學生,教師和學生,班主任和學生,系領導及學生);
2)上下級關系;
3)同事關系;
4)實習單位領導與實習生的關系。
2. 他們知道時間、之后;
3. 申請人的哪些素質給推薦人留下了深刻的印象(推薦人欣賞哪些品質是推薦的核心);
4. 對申請人寄予什么樣的希望(希望通常是預料之中的是希望申請人在申請領域繼續(xù)學習,最終會有所成就)。
那么讓我們來看看書寫格式。
1. 總分總結構
2. 總分結構
3. 結構小計
在單獨的段落里,也很好是這三種結構。
但是是由于申請材料較多,為了讓評審教授能夠在短時間內很好地了解你的特點所印象,我建議我們不在乎是整體結構也是段落的結構使用前兩個:
1 總分總結構
2 總分結構。
本推薦信的總體結構采用總分組織,具體特征推薦采用總分結構。
最后,讓我們看看參考模型。
(一)標題的可用格式有:
dear sir/madam/to whom it may concern:
(二)第一段:引語句。你可以參考:
“it is a pleasure to recommend to you (name), a former student of mine at (name of university).”
“i am very happy to have this opportunity to recommend (name), who is presently applying for admission to your graduate (or undergraduate) program in (name of program).”
“i understand that (name) is applying for admissions to your graduate (undergraduate) school, and has requested that i write this letter of recommendation for her/him.”
“in my capacity as professor at xxxx university, i have known xxx for three years, as both his/her advisor and professor.”
(三)第二段:這一段可以提供最實質性的內容。例如,如果推薦人是教授,說明學生們在他的門下所所學課程。
“(name) took two of my courses during the 1998-99 academic year, as follows; “xxxxx” and “xxxxx”.”
“(name) was enrolled in three of classes from september 1998 to june 1999 “xxx” and “xxx”.”
下一個,教授寫了申請者在課堂上的表現,如完成的研究計劃、實驗室研究、研究報告、檢查結果、課堂態(tài)度、參加討論課等,舉出例子。
“in my class (es), (name) did excellent work. she always listened attentively, participated actively in class, and handed in very good written assignment.
“in particular, his/her research paper on (topic) was of exceptionally high quality, and showed that s/he fully understands and has a strong background in his/her field.”
如果推薦人是工作主管,首先,一定要仔細陳述你的責任,并對申請人的表現進行評估。如果可能,請舉例說明。
“when (name) held the position of (job title) in this company she was one s/he was one of my best employees. his/her job responsibilities included (describe them), and s/he carried out his/her duties with exceptional skill and professionalism.”
“s/he not only did his/her own work, but also helped other employees, and made many valuable contributions to the efficient running to our firm.”
第二段和最后一段:可以說申請人在班上(或者在公司里)比較性能(比如排名):
“i was rate (name)’s academic ability as in the top 10% of his/her class.”
申請不成功推薦信,一般有三個問題:
1、大多數參考文獻是學生自己寫作,就讓推薦人揮揮筆吧,簽個名就行了。
2、無論如何所有些人在推薦信中說了很多話,談論被推薦人是如何成為優(yōu)秀,我只想做同樣的事。
3、僅限推薦信是形式,外國大學你想接納我嗎,仍然是取決于我的分數。有最終決定權。。
事實上,推薦信的質量可能直接決定你的申請是否成功,是申請中的硬傷,很好的推薦是入學的重要條件之一。
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