雅思寫(xiě)作考試怎樣備考

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雅思考試前,不管水平如何,備考雅思是好成績(jī)的基礎(chǔ),那么,讓我們來(lái)看看如何準(zhǔn)備雅思寫(xiě)作考試?

我們先來(lái)看看這樣一個(gè)雅思題目:

Should old man live with their own children together, or should they live in the nursing houses?

許多學(xué)生一旦掌握了直覺(jué)就會(huì)做出選擇。當(dāng)然,老人家里應(yīng)該由孩子照顧,怎么能送到老人院?然后,我急切地開(kāi)始寫(xiě)一篇作文。但上面寫(xiě)著,可以發(fā)現(xiàn),這兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)中的任何一個(gè)都是不夠的,中間我沒(méi)什么好說(shuō)的,或者有些想法是用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的,障礙太多了。

考試的過(guò)程應(yīng)該分解如下4步:

1.閱讀主題

2.論問(wèn)題類型

3.大綱

4.選擇一個(gè)位置

1、閱讀主題

這個(gè)步驟相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單,雅思寫(xiě)作通常沒(méi)有復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)句和難句,只要我們彼此認(rèn)識(shí)所有些話就可以了。當(dāng)然,如果你遇到生詞,解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題也有兩種方法。

一是上下文猜測(cè)。比如下面的問(wèn)題:Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree? 其中的第一個(gè)字disruptive也許有些學(xué)生彼此不認(rèn)識(shí),我不知道確切的意思。但是是在下面students who are "noisy and disobedient"同義解釋,我們不難得出結(jié)論"吵鬧的,不羈"這就是它的意思。

二是通讀機(jī)器經(jīng)典,刪除新單詞。因?yàn)?,不一定所有些生詞是可以猜出來(lái)的。有時(shí)它會(huì)出現(xiàn)在標(biāo)題中"censorship"(審查制度) 、"anti-social behavior"(反社會(huì)行為)、"juvenile delinquency"(青少年犯罪)這意味著比較專業(yè)新詞,候選人基本上是無(wú)法從上下文推斷出確切的含義,更好的解決方案是是通讀機(jī)器經(jīng)典。

2.論問(wèn)題類型

所謂詞問(wèn)句類型,事實(shí)上是標(biāo)題后半句的寫(xiě)作說(shuō)明,寫(xiě)作要求。不同的問(wèn)題,不同的寫(xiě)作要求,邏輯步驟不同,段落結(jié)構(gòu)不同,這也將直接影響到下一步欄目提綱工作要做的操作。

雅思通常有五種類型的作文,每個(gè)題目的形式都有很明顯的標(biāo)記。這是一張單子是每類問(wèn)題的示例,請(qǐng)注意以下粗體書(shū)寫(xiě)說(shuō)明。

是否同意

Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree?

Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not eliminate the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雙邊討論

Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media, while others argue that it will hinder information freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion。

利弊分析

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at a primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

解決問(wèn)題

Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

綜合性問(wèn)題

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this case? Is it a positive development?

3.大綱

說(shuō)起來(lái)容易,所謂語(yǔ)概述,只有是列出主題所需的參數(shù),包括:支持或反對(duì)意見(jiàn)的理由,事物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn),問(wèn)題的原因、結(jié)果、解決方案等。但是是實(shí)際上,不同的話題,難度不同,我們也可以列出不同的論點(diǎn)。即使是簡(jiǎn)單的主題,還是要經(jīng)歷一次"思考"和"屏幕"階段。

讓我們回到這個(gè)例子,讓我們做個(gè)示范:

Should old man live with their own children together, or should they live in the nursing houses?

第一,"思考"只是是我們所是的brainstorming過(guò)程?;趯?duì)題目的正確理解,考生可以考慮和分析題目的兩個(gè)對(duì)立方面的利弊,不僅僅是是堅(jiān)持你先入為主或本能的選擇"在家照顧父母"的好處。這樣的,你可以讓你以后的決定更客觀,讓理性而不是情感來(lái)決定我們的立場(chǎng)。當(dāng)然,這門(mén)課本身并不難,所具有,我相信大多數(shù)考生都能想到以下幾點(diǎn)。

你可以用下表對(duì)雙方進(jìn)行比較。

At home VS nursing house

1. 與家人的情感交流,歸屬感1. 和其他老人在一起(當(dāng)代的/朋友)溝通

2. 方便的、樂(lè)于助人的2. 專業(yè)照顧好,醫(yī)療保?。ū苊馐鹿拾l(fā)生)

3. 傳統(tǒng),孝順,責(zé)任,義務(wù),3. 適應(yīng)社會(huì)發(fā)展趨勢(shì)

4. 分擔(dān)家務(wù),有孩子嗎4. 豐富多彩的活動(dòng)

5. 省錢(服務(wù)好的敬老院更貴)5. 省心(別擔(dān)心你的父母)

應(yīng)該說(shuō),這樣的大綱,肯定和否定論點(diǎn)之間有對(duì)應(yīng)關(guān)系,無(wú)論你選擇哪一方作為你的立場(chǎng),有足夠的內(nèi)容可以播放。但是是,在候選人真正開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作之前,我們必須先考慮一個(gè)問(wèn)題,那么是,這些內(nèi)容不能用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)嗎?是否是詞匯障礙,仍然是難以表達(dá)清楚?

所具有,下一步的篩選非常重要??忌鷳?yīng)該看看自己所有沒(méi)有什么觀點(diǎn)是被迫從文章中刪除的。

包括:

缺乏詞匯支持

難以表達(dá)清楚

弱論點(diǎn)

缺乏詞匯支持

從詞匯分析,我們需要使用一些困難的短語(yǔ):family bound(家庭歸屬), professional medical service(專業(yè)醫(yī)療服務(wù)),social trends(社會(huì)趨勢(shì)),fulfill one's filial duty(孝順),responsibility and obligation(責(zé)任和義務(wù))。

對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)最困難的是,最好是表達(dá)類似的東西"在中國(guó),孩子們選擇自己照顧父母,因?yàn)樾㈨樃改?、孝順是傳統(tǒng),是兒童的責(zé)任和義務(wù)"觀點(diǎn)。當(dāng)然,即使我不知道上面的短語(yǔ),聰明的學(xué)生也會(huì)想用paraphrase試著表達(dá)你自己,但是是詞匯量必然是低劣的,更重要的是,更多的人可能在絞盡腦汁是我沒(méi)想到最后會(huì)被迫放棄。所具有"what you want to say"沒(méi)關(guān)系,"what you can say"只是是癥結(jié)。

難以表達(dá)清楚

一些想法,談話中,我們可以用幾句漢語(yǔ)讓對(duì)方明白意思。但是是寫(xiě)作,尤其地是雅思寫(xiě)作很不一樣。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Task Response在一個(gè)項(xiàng)目中,對(duì)擴(kuò)大論據(jù)有明確的要求,候選人是必需的"present,extend,and support main ideas",避免"over-generalize"。有些想法很難擴(kuò)展,也許是太抽象,無(wú)法擴(kuò)展,所考生應(yīng)根據(jù)實(shí)際情況作出選擇。

比如,剛剛贍養(yǎng)父母住敬老院的原因,"適應(yīng)社會(huì)發(fā)展趨勢(shì)",只是是很難解釋清楚,別說(shuō)什么了,你也可能會(huì)遇到詞匯障礙。

弱論點(diǎn)

這是最后一個(gè)是,當(dāng)有足夠的論據(jù)支持一個(gè)政黨的立場(chǎng),并且所有這些論據(jù)都能順利地表達(dá)出來(lái),考生應(yīng)盡量選擇更符合邏輯的,更直接的論點(diǎn),但是,相對(duì)較弱的示范效應(yīng)是可以消除的。例如,支持父母與子女同住的論點(diǎn),"省錢"和"分擔(dān)家務(wù)",支持父母住在養(yǎng)老院"適應(yīng)社會(huì)發(fā)展趨勢(shì)",這些實(shí)際上是是它屬于后者的弱論點(diǎn)。因?yàn)?,畢竟,他們中的大多?shù)人沒(méi)有是把父母留在家里省錢做家務(wù),一點(diǎn)也不是把父母送到老年人之家以便跟上潮流。

4、選擇一個(gè)位置

事實(shí)上,如果我們剛剛經(jīng)歷了思考和篩選的步驟,做決定是一件簡(jiǎn)單而可靠的事。也許是為了這個(gè)主題,大多數(shù)候選人會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這一點(diǎn),選擇"父母住在老年人之家"作為一個(gè)立場(chǎng),看來(lái)這個(gè)論點(diǎn)更好,它更容易玩。當(dāng)然,這并不意味著,我們需要改變我們真正的想法,真的把父母送到老人家去,只有我們是使用"更聰明的"我剛寫(xiě)了一篇作文。

當(dāng)然,我們的最終目標(biāo)是提高寫(xiě)作速度。我們只會(huì)選擇位置--父母住在老年人之家--論點(diǎn)安排如下:

專業(yè)醫(yī)療保健,避免事故發(fā)生

孩子們比較放松

老人院里有許多同齡的人,有更多的交流

豐富的活動(dòng)

在這個(gè)時(shí)候,候選人只剩下兩件事要做,首先,在你的腦海里展開(kāi)爭(zhēng)論,自然梳理關(guān)鍵詞;第二,組織語(yǔ)言,就這樣是連詞構(gòu)成句子、句子組作業(yè),只要多注意一下連貫性和凝聚力。一步一步,只是是聽(tīng)了老師的話,你自己練習(xí),最容易提高熟練程度和效率的部分。

具體操作,我們可以參考前面的兩個(gè)論點(diǎn)body段落1演示:

essional medical care'old people health problem'facility +equipment+ staff' always available'emergency'quickly respond'accident/tragedy avoid

t children' no need to worry'focus on career

基本上,整段的關(guān)鍵詞列在這里,剩下的時(shí)間,幾乎所有的學(xué)生都來(lái)了5-8幾分鐘后寫(xiě)一篇100單詞周圍的段落出來(lái)了。

Most obviously and importantly, aged parents can be well tended in nursing houses. As is known to all, old people usually suffer from the pain of all kinds of diseases or the potential health hazards, while in nursing houses they can receive professional care, with first-class medical facilities equipped and experienced staff always available. Therefore, the possible risks could be minimized and numerous accidents can be avoided, because when emergency happens, nursing houses will definitely respond more promptly than family, who are not likely to be with their aged parents all the time. At the same time, adults don't have to be distracted or worry about their parents, so they can better focus on their career, which benefits the society in some senses。

通過(guò)上面的,不難看出,有效檢查,它不僅可以幫助你更好地選擇正確的位置,減少半途而廢的風(fēng)險(xiǎn),它更能在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中分離出部分內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)作時(shí),注重語(yǔ)言組織,復(fù)雜和復(fù)雜的多線程處理是分開(kāi)進(jìn)行的,效率更高。

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